This is the first full draft of our music video, featuring filming that we have gained from all of our filming sessions. Whilst there are many strong point throughout our video, such as the handheld camera movements when filming the natural elements at the beginning and when filming the people, we still have many points to improve on.
Weakness':
- It appears she is walking to much. We need to try to make it seem as she is walking for a purpose. The purpose is of course to get to the field and perform the last section of the song. But this does not come across very well.
- At the first section of our music video where she is singing into the camera it does not give the right feel we were going for. We aimed to make it seem as she is singing aimlessly, almost mumbling but it is very clear she is singing out and performing. Because of this we will re-film but from a slightly different angle so that the camera is further behind her but can still see her lips moving.
-Since filming the dancers we have really sat down and worked out how to film them properly. This includes almost filming move by move to make sure we get good cuts. This has all steamed from the poor quality of the filming we currently have of them.
- We also need to think about introducing the dancers earlier in the video to make them fit better, we are considering seeing them physically bump into the lead.
- In the final section of the video we see the lead singing into the camera. This is framed completely wrong and will need to rethought.
Strength's
- Good Continuity
- The shaking at the start of the music video and the clips of the everyday people link well.
- Rule of thirds used well throughout apart from final section.
- The introduction of color as the music volume increases is good.
-The tracking shot of the normal, everyday people works really well. It was filmed while being on a bus so we plan to alter the technique slightly so we can control how fast we go by using a car instead.
(Comments by Rosie)
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